Not trying to be mean, but this song is just immature and not musical at all. I reccomend trying to write a real song instead of posting noise waves with foul language. Thank you.
The spanisg thing is cool, but times it sounds like the chords and lead guitar are in completely different keys. Cause the lead in in a major key and the chords are in a minor key. That really should be fixed. And the loop sounds a little unnatural.
I love it!
I like everything about this song. I love your voice and the guitar bass and drums are all good. The song sounds professional too. Great job.
Background is nice.
I really like the song. It's well put together, and I like the lo-fi. I do think the vocals should be turned WAY up. I can tell that they sound good, but it's a struggle and it's really the only thing hurting the song.
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